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Have you noticed?

When I don’t talk,
There’s silence between us.

When I don’t call,
There’s distance.

When I don’t text,
We run out of words.

Have you noticed?

When I don’t ask
There’s no openness.

When I don’t show affection
None of us cares.

When I don’t pray
There’s no amen.

Darling, have you noticed?
That I’m the one dating us.

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  • III
    Posted July 30, 2019 at 3:16 pm 0Likes

    🤔 I have noticed.

    • Poetic Ali
      Posted July 30, 2019 at 8:19 pm 0Likes

      Guilty as charged is who is the other. Thank you for coming by.

  • Tuedor Abigail
    Posted July 30, 2019 at 7:19 pm 0Likes

    Reminds me of hazel in John Green’s the fault in our star, though the story is different but she kinda realised there was no longer a “us” after Gus’ death. Loll, OK. I play too much.
    Nice one tho..

    • Poetic Ali
      Posted July 30, 2019 at 8:21 pm 0Likes

      You ehn! God!
      Anyways, thanks for coming by.

      • Tuedor Abigail
        Posted July 30, 2019 at 8:46 pm 0Likes

        Always a pleasure😊😊

  • Winifred
    Posted August 5, 2019 at 7:00 am 0Likes

    Awwwnnn this is sadly true of some relationships.

    With time the one who tries to keep them together, gets tired of being the glued.
    Beautiful poem Cirphrank

  • marvins_Oj
    Posted August 8, 2019 at 9:59 am 0Likes

    so true

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